After some feedback on the writing and layout of the Making of the test page, I have made the adjustments, and I think it looks much better and more like the design I want for my book.
Much better... BUT - get rid of that little bit of cropped drawing on the edge of the little girl circle - it's a visual 'fly in the ointment' and you still need to fix your big title - it reads as Making Laura (pause) Boots - which makes no sense - reduce the size of the font and keep the whole sentence on one line so we read it as one statement.
Much better... BUT - get rid of that little bit of cropped drawing on the edge of the little girl circle - it's a visual 'fly in the ointment' and you still need to fix your big title - it reads as Making Laura (pause) Boots - which makes no sense - reduce the size of the font and keep the whole sentence on one line so we read it as one statement.
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