Saturday 18 March 2017

@ Phil - script draft

Hello, Phil, I have done my first script draft for my mitosis superhero idea and I need advice on how is at the moment and if it needs improvement, hope it is really good.

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  1. Hi Laura - can you send your script as .doc file? Cheers.

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  2. Hi Laura - just a quick observation: I've read your script and it kind of suggests that the body has a 'special cell' that does a 'special job' of dividing, when really the message is that all cells do this amazing job. Your script - in this way - is a bit misleading I think and might confuse people - the idea of 'hero cell'. I think you need to think about re-tuning your script a bit to make the point that 'all cells are heroes' because of this job they do. What do you think?

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    1. I think so, I gotten a bit too focused on 1 cell then all of them. Ill go back and fix that

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    2. could you help me make with this problem please

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